Greytree of Silverclan

Name: Greytree

Gender: She-cat

Age: 120 moons old

Rank: Elder

Clan: Silverclan

Family:
Mother: Shiningeyes
Father: Thunderstorm

History:
Greytree was an only kit and was small and weak throughout her kithood. She was born deaf but gained her hearing at 5 moons old, causing everyone to think that she would never be a warrior. She loved to play mossball with other kits. When Greytree was an apprentice, she was eager to learn and hunt. She loved the feel of prey in her claws and misses it deeply. Greytree sometimes sneaks out to hunt at night. As a warrior, Greytree was loyal and bossy at times. She almost lost her tail in a fox trap and it is still a mangled mess of fur and flesh. She had thought about being a medicine cat, but decided not to with the help of Shiningeyes. She was barren, and never had a mate.

Personality:
Greytree could get a bit overpowering when cats would trespass on Silverclan territory, when she was a warrior. She can give up when she is frustrated and does it a lot. She is kind to all cats, and will bend the rules to help her clan. Greytree can be very threatening at times, even through her old age.

Skills:
Hunting: 7
Tracking: 5
Running: 6
Fighting: 5
Memory: 9
Stamina: 2
Swimming: 0
Speed: 3

Description:
Grey she-cat with violet eyes and a white chest and muzzle. She has pure white straight whiskers. Her tail is a mangled mess of fur and flesh. One of her ears is ripped through the middle.

  This is fine the way it is, I changed the audition sheet so unless you want to change something, I'll be moving it to the accepted.